see thats way better but hold back on the insults a bit and make yourself sound like your reasonable to reach to that bit of audience that would instantly call bait if you say shit like "Ethan is a bodyshot crouchspray merchant", the title also has to be more direct for the ppl that haven't clicked on the thread yet, like in your case it should be something like "EG's players are overrated" or "C0M and Boostio will fail" for a bit of spice. Also make sure you never half ass any slander whatsoever, don't praise Ethan by saying that he has great util usage after allat, its either you leave out the praise or barely mention him at all.
With the stats bit, specifically cherry pick the worst ones you can find and elaborate on it if you wanna go the extra mile. I like what you did with the Boostio and c0m bit but try and stretch that bit out bc that's the juicy part of the thread since those are the ppl you're calling frauds. Praising Demon1 and Jawg for most of the thread the title is called "frauds (serious)" doesn't make sense no?
Be creative with it and sound as genuine as possible (very important), it doesn't matter if you sound stupid as fuck, if you make ppl believe that what you're saying is what you're actually thinking then it worked. I like what ur doing with the replies too though gj on that, but a weak thread won't attract enough comments for you to reply to.
https://www.vlr.gg/292426/why-sen-is-the-true-na-superteam this is the good example of a decent bait thread, but if you want to maximize as much traction as possible, get creative with it like what the same OP did here https://www.vlr.gg/291493/na-this-year-has-been-awful