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geospliced [#2]I've recently gotten back into writing after taking a break for a month! Also, I'm doing well in my schools musical.
That's great to hear bro I'm proud of you Geospliced
geospliced [#2]I've recently gotten back into writing after taking a break for a month! Also, I'm doing well in my schools musical.
what genre do you write
uwukitten [#16]what genre do you write
That's a great question uwukitten! The story I'm currently working on right now is a realistic fiction/romance piece about people growing up and forming meaningful relationships with one another. I guess it could be seen as a bildungsroman but I switch perspectives between the characters so it doesn't really focus on any specific one in particular.
geospliced [#18]That's a great question uwukitten! The story I'm currently working on right now is a realistic fiction/romance piece about people growing up and forming meaningful relationships with one another. I guess it could be seen as a bildungsroman but I switch perspectives between the characters so it doesn't really focus on any specific one in particular.
please write demon1 and jawg kissing pleaaaase
cartixuzi [#20]please write demon1 and jawg kissing pleaaaase
No. Although it's just a hobby of mine, my friends still read my products, and I try my best not to spend time attempting to produce any pieces that may offend/disturb them. Also, it's hard for me to write about real people because I write in the first person present perspective and it's difficult to understand what real people feel and think.
geospliced [#2]I've recently gotten back into writing after taking a break for a month! Also, I'm doing well in my schools musical.
Opinion on my piece?
i was having fun at the waterslide when suddenly i noticed a big shadow covering the entire pool i looked up and there i saw him, Ardiis. He was coming straight for me, he jumped into the pool and the velocity of the wave that followed knocked me unconcious.
When i woke up i was chained in a cold and dirty room and there he was, streaming the popular shooter game VALORANT on Twitch while talking to his chat, somehow he managed to say the word "bro" 254 times in just 3 sentences how is that even possible?? I quickly realised that the chains were actually made of chocolate, confused (and mainly hungry) i started licking and sucking them as fast as i could and managed to crawl out of the room -that i presumed was probably his mothers basement- while remaining unseen.
I searched around the house for an exit and i quickly found the front door. As soon as i exited the building i saw a horde of angry Brazilians holding blowtorches and pitchforks chanting at ardiis and calling him a racist and a loser. I didn't really care so i tried to get out of the scene as soon as possible but just as i was about to step out of the house, ardiis put his enormous hand on my shoulder and whispered with a soft and melodic tone in my ear "You're not going anywhere pumpkin pie" and "Daddy's gonna take care of this swifly". He stepped out of the house and suddenly yelled "WATCH THIS" as he flamboyantly dashed into the air and suddenly made 5 knives materialise around him. He used the knives to effortlessly tap every single brazilian in the area.
I was so afraid, blood was spilled everywhere. When it all was over ardiis looked in my direction and i knew that it was over, if they didnt stand a chance, then i wouldnt either, so i just gave up. Ardiis started walkingin my direction each step making the ground shake. When he got to me he just sat down on me saying that i got cold and he needed to warm me up. After a while he took me inside the smelly basement again and took his clothes off. He started smelling me and licking my ear, and then he suddenly got very embarrased and told me i can just leave.
Turns out that this was a huge misunderstanding, this whole time he thought that i was a chocolate egg and he wanted to eat me. The disappointment on his face when he realized the mistake he had done was palpable, a tangible testament to the depth of his sorrow.
geospliced [#21]No. Although it's just a hobby of mine, my friends still read my products, and I try my best not to spend time attempting to produce any pieces that may offend/disturb them. Also, it's hard for me to write about real people because I write in the first person present perspective and it's difficult to understand what real people feel and think.
what if i said pretty please
geospliced [#15]Thank you conut! What about you?
Not the best, just got some bad news unfortunately.
Conut [#24]Not the best, just got some bad news unfortunately.
I'm not going to pry, but I hope whatever it is gets better. Please do tell if I can do anything to help 😊
cartixuzi [#23]what if i said pretty please
I'm afraid I just don't have the required knowledge and time to write a story about demon1 and jawgemo kissing. I'm not even done with 10% of my current piece, and I'd really like to finish that by the time I graduate.
Mozzarellas [#22]Opinion on my piece?
i was having fun at the waterslide when suddenly i noticed a big shadow covering the entire pool i looked up and there i saw him, Ardiis. He was coming straight for me, he jumped into the pool and the velocity of the wave that followed knocked me unconcious.When i woke up i was chained in a cold and dirty room and there he was, streaming the popular shooter game VALORANT on Twitch while talking to his chat, somehow he managed to say the word "bro" 254 times in just 3 sentences how is that even possible?? I quickly realised that the chains were actually made of chocolate, confused (and mainly hungry) i started licking and sucking them as fast as i could and managed to crawl out of the room -that i presumed was probably his mothers basement- while remaining unseen.
I searched around the house for an exit and i quickly found the front door. As soon as i exited the building i saw a horde of angry Brazilians holding blowtorches and pitchforks chanting at ardiis and calling him a racist and a loser. I didn't really care so i tried to get out of the scene as soon as possible but just as i was about to step out of the house, ardiis put his enormous hand on my shoulder and whispered with a soft and melodic tone in my ear "You're not going anywhere pumpkin pie" and "Daddy's gonna take care of this swifly". He stepped out of the house and suddenly yelled "WATCH THIS" as he flamboyantly dashed into the air and suddenly made 5 knives materialise around him. He used the knives to effortlessly tap every single brazilian in the area.
I was so afraid, blood was spilled everywhere. When it all was over ardiis looked in my direction and i knew that it was over, if they didnt stand a chance, then i wouldnt either, so i just gave up. Ardiis started walkingin my direction each step making the ground shake. When he got to me he just sat down on me saying that i got cold and he needed to warm me up. After a while he took me inside the smelly basement again and took his clothes off. He started smelling me and licking my ear, and then he suddenly got very embarrased and told me i can just leave.
Turns out that this was a huge misunderstanding, this whole time he thought that i was a chocolate egg and he wanted to eat me. The disappointment on his face when he realized the mistake he had done was palpable, a tangible testament to the depth of his sorrow.
But of course! I've read this piece quite a numerous amount of times. While there is a general lack of showing-not-telling, I feel like it conveys an adequate amount of the emotions the narrator intends to express. Overall I think it's a decent piece but it could be more suspenseful if made longer. However, I understand that this moment was a traumatizing experience for the protagonist, so it makes sense that it's short and fast paced.
goofyahh1447 [#9]I just ordered my 250k euro mercedes amg g class
damn now come to switzerland and drive it :)
geospliced [#26]I'm afraid I just don't have the required knowledge and time to write a story about demon1 and jawgemo kissing. I'm not even done with 10% of my current piece, and I'd really like to finish that by the time I graduate.
demon1 is the bottom and jawg is the top, headcanon the rest or smth pleaaaaas
Nachtel [#30]Ive been getting into playing a lot of football (soccer) recently
That's fun, personally I've never really been into sports but I think that's very nice.
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