PLEASE HELP A BROTHA OUT

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Crayzid

hey guys, serious post, but just wanted to share with yall my passion for sports journalism :)

this is my first ever published article online and my only experience is regional sports writing competitions

anw let me know ur thoughts on this if u read it, thanks! (it's about football btw)

https://dray.journoportfolio.com/articles/the-rise-of-raphinha/

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Nef0r0

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I would say it's a great read! Perhaps you could have given more insight from interviews from flick, raphinha, barca teammates, perhaps as an example of hate you can pull off critique he received in 2023-2024. Perhaps you could also go into how Raphinha's great form isn't enough to carry Brazil, so perhaps his great form can only be unlocked by Flick

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Crayzid

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yeah ur absolutely right! journalism 101 is always using interviews to strengthen points and i somehow completely forgot to include em 😭 ill keep these in mind and thank u sm ^_^

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Nef0r0

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I feel like the interviews here would make it more personal with examples of hate and praise

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Crayzid

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for sure, appreciate ur comments bro <3

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Wezzaa

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Good job bro really enjoyable read

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welikefortniteandvalorant

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Its really good, i dont know too much about journaling to give you any feedback but i enjoyed it keep going

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MissesHisShots

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nice article man, props to you