VLR Bait Review #11

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CanadaMan

User: Stormm
Title: E-Girls come
Post contents:
Looking for an e-kitten rank Iron-Gold (MAX)18+. Needs to be able to sleep call, and reassure me because I have trust issues. Need to have good meow because thats what gets me to play better. Also matching names, PFP's, and tags are a must. I'm a Radiant Peak, currently immo with money to spoil my egirl. I can also help you become a beast at val and demolish all your opponents. Applications are open. (Add me if you think you're a worthy contender.)

Date and time: Aug 20, 2024 at 12:58 AM EDT

Bait category: Shitpost

Very cringe but done in a purposeful way. This post is very obviously a shitpost and not "real" which is a good thing most of the time. What really makes this a good shitpost however is the fact that the user stayed in character in the replies.

Total Bait rating = 6/8

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bruhmphrey

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E-Girls WHATNOW! Humana humana humana

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CanadaMan

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AWOOOOOGA AWOOOOGA

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nihso

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Did my rating go down when I stayed in character?

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CanadaMan

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no it went up it was a 5/8 before i read the replies

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nihso

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So why isn't it a 8/8? Please coach give me some room for improvement.

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CanadaMan

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The cringe factor needs to be turned up, it reads to monotone like you are just hitting the checklist for what you think a "looking for e girls" post would be instead of letting the creativity flow and putting poetry on paper or screen in this sense.