VLR Bait Review #11

User: Stormm
Title: E-Girls come
Post contents:
Looking for an e-kitten rank Iron-Gold (MAX)18+. Needs to be able to sleep call, and reassure me because I have trust issues. Need to have good meow because thats what gets me to play better. Also matching names, PFP's, and tags are a must. I'm a Radiant Peak, currently immo with money to spoil my egirl. I can also help you become a beast at val and demolish all your opponents. Applications are open. (Add me if you think you're a worthy contender.)

Date and time: Aug 20, 2024 at 12:58 AM EDT

Bait category: Shitpost

Very cringe but done in a purposeful way. This post is very obviously a shitpost and not "real" which is a good thing most of the time. What really makes this a good shitpost however is the fact that the user stayed in character in the replies.

Total Bait rating = 6/8

E-Girls WHATNOW! Humana humana humana

bruhmphrey [#2]

E-Girls WHATNOW! Humana humana humana

AWOOOOOGA AWOOOOGA

Did my rating go down when I stayed in character?

nihso [#4]

Did my rating go down when I stayed in character?

no it went up it was a 5/8 before i read the replies

CanadaMan [#5]

no it went up it was a 5/8 before i read the replies

So why isn't it a 8/8? Please coach give me some room for improvement.

nihso [#6]

So why isn't it a 8/8? Please coach give me some room for improvement.

The cringe factor needs to be turned up, it reads to monotone like you are just hitting the checklist for what you think a "looking for e girls" post would be instead of letting the creativity flow and putting poetry on paper or screen in this sense.