you have solid mechanics and good disclipline while shooting but i wish i could see more of you taking aggressive duels instead of playing angles. i cant gauge super well how good your swings/prefires are but from what i saw i do think you can swing more confidently, focus on anticipating targets a bit better, and just being more "ready to shoot" when swinging angles
i do think you could change up movement a bit more when you miss your initial burst. adad spam is ok sometimes but it can be predictable, sometimes after missing a burst you can move the same direction you peeked from and it can throw off some people. sometimes you can swing wider after a burst and it can give you an advantage.