Expecting 20 year old tiktok brained gamers to consume 100+ pages of TEXT is delusional. Your doc looks nice but almost all of the useful information is so diluted in extra useless chaff that no one will ever find and retain it. Also, keep in mind that you need to be producing these at least weekly and sometimes every other day in a tournament setting. There is no time. Communicating 3-5 actionable points in the simplest possible terms is literally the only thing useful to Valorant pros. Too much information is as bad or even worse than too little.
I also applied for this in the offseason and made phase two of the application process. I can assure you that I have no connections with anyone at the org and I definitely didn't cut and paste map lore from a wiki into my document.