I just tried editing for the first time

I kinda just threw a bunch of clips together and did some color correction and idk how ppl do that for a job there is so much nitpicking
lmk if there is anything i should change or your thought :)
if you want to see
https://youtu.be/bqep00sNEVo

change everything

"This Killing is terrible buisness but I always said if I must do something,be the best"

it seems a bit bright at times

fade ins and outs look pretty amateur, try syncing the clips by frames of the characters animations

Stop editing