first hard edit - please give CC

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ofxr69GdWOU

• awaiting constructive criticism

its so good, maybe the knife sound at the end is a bit out of place

not_toxic_at_all [#2]

its so good, maybe the knife sound at the end is a bit out of place

Okay, i'll try to work on that :)

Not a bad start

LouBag [#5]

Not a bad start

ty

actually pretty good, keep working on it

is there any way the missed shot could have been edited out, so it was a bit smoother towards the end?

AltonBu02 [#7]

actually pretty good, keep working on it

is there any way the missed shot could have been edited out, so it was a bit smoother towards the end?

ty ty

Pretty good for a first edit. What you can improve on is add motion blur and time remap the clips so that kills happen exactly on the beat like the bullets hit exactly when the beat drops. You can use an effect called twixtor for that or even basic time remapping would do

Add more ingame noise. the few noises that do come out feel too out of place. Honestly even keeping the spectre pick up noise would help. just make it a little noisier. or alternatively you can tweak the noises and stuff to make it fit better to the music.