I'm not gonna act like that shit was concise, but calling it meaningless garbage and then saying it could have cut into 5 sentences means there's valid points that should be read there. Its not that hard to read 3 or 4 extra sentences. I'm not making a 117 page document here. You can skim it for all I care. Name like 2 or 3 things that are convoluted in that paragraph and I take the L here.
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