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Tried making some transfer graphics

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Denjisideals

https://x.com/oyasumidenden/status/1834495516786524280?t=9xCB2S8lCijoP3BvsKs5UA&s=19

Need some opinions on what to change too btw specially the background
Also I am not good at this, just know the bare minimum from back when in 2019 I used to make manga analysis on Instagram.

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SuperRoss
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Twitter is mid

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number_1_wackie_fan
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i really like them, good job

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Denjisideals
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Thanks :3

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Diebs
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remove the done deal text imo

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Alright
Which one do you think is better of the two tho

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Diebs
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2nd one looks better it has both his org logo and that sentinel emblem

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Denjisideals
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Thanks for the feedback :3

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Huitzilopochtli
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right one looks very clean good job

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Denjisideals
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Thank you for the feedback :3

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burritx
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I can appreciate the effort that went into both of them but they don't hit hard at all

1/5

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Denjisideals
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All good
I am learning :)

#13
swaggerlikejagger
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left imo, no need for m80 logo at top since you already have it at the bottom

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Okay thanks for the feedback:3

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