need feedback music

I made this song but don't know if its good

I know the Mixing is shit and the beat aint mine (it's free 4 profit) but I'm gonna learn both soon

Lyrics ans singing mine tho
Also pls constructive criticism

Here it
Listen to 9raditude by c4ne on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/svPSH

I know the intro is long but i like it