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I made a plot line for a light novel. Readers come

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Netero

DREAM RUNNERS (mystery/psychological/thriller)

A man finds himself immersed in extraordinarily vivid dreams, as if they stretch on for hours. Amidst the reverie, he becomes an unwitting witness to a botched robbery in the heart of Los Angeles, resulting in a tragic murder. From his vantage point across the road, he flees the scene, but only manages to cover a few blocks before stumbling upon a group of police officers. Eager to share the harrowing incident, he recounts the events in detail, his urgency compelling them to act swiftly. However, rather than questioning him, the authorities promptly initiate their investigation.

After a string of subsequent peculiar occurrences, though lacking violence, the man awakens, bewildered by the length and realism of his dream. Remaining motionless in bed, he contemplates the surreal experience for a few fleeting moments. His confusion intensifies when the first news report of the day reveals an eerily similar robbery and murder, taking place on a street that mirrors the one he traversed within his dream. Perceiving it as an astonishing coincidence, he dismisses the uncanny connection and proceeds with his daily routine.

An uneventful day at the office follows, and upon returning home, the man attends to his evening rituals. As he settles onto the couch, he belatedly realizes he forgot to switch off the television. The news captivates his attention, disclosing additional details about the unfolding case. Surveillance footage, captured by CCTV cameras, is released to elicit public assistance in identifying the suspect. A surge of astonishment courses through him as the camera lens zooms in on the faces of both the assailant and the victim, for they are identical to the ones he encountered within his dream. Transfixed, his initial shock transmutes into a mingling of fear and bewilderment when a man on the opposite side of the road comes into focus. The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!"

A cascade of questions engulfs his mind. How could he be certain he was dreaming, when reality seems to converge with his nocturnal visions? As a resident of San Francisco, residing six hours away from Los Angeles, how did he become intricately entangled in this unfolding drama? Is the figure captured by the camera genuinely him, or does a doppelganger haunt the streets of LA, granting him a voyeuristic window into their world through his dreams? The answers lie shrouded in mystery, and the man embarks on a journey to unravel the enigma, setting the stage for the captivating tale called DREAM RUNNERS.

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Qwertyy
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DREAM RUNNERS (mystery/phycological/thriller)

A man finds himself immersed in extraordinarily vivid dreams, as if they stretch on for hours. Amidst the reverie, he becomes an unwitting witness to a botched robbery in the heart of Los Angeles, resulting in a tragic murder. From his vantage point across the road, he flees the scene, but only manages to cover a few blocks before stumbling upon a group of police officers. Eager to share the harrowing incident, he recounts the events in detail, his urgency compelling them to act swiftly. However, rather than questioning him, the authorities promptly initiate their investigation.

After a string of subsequent peculiar occurrences, though lacking violence, the man awakens, bewildered by the length and realism of his dream. Remaining motionless in bed, he contemplates the surreal experience for a few fleeting moments. His confusion intensifies when the first news report of the day reveals an eerily similar robbery and murder, taking place on a street that mirrors the one he traversed within his dream. Perceiving it as an astonishing coincidence, he dismisses the uncanny connection and proceeds with his daily routine.

An uneventful day at the office follows, and upon returning home, the man attends to his evening rituals. As he settles onto the couch, he belatedly realizes he forgot to switch off the television. The news captivates his attention, disclosing additional details about the unfolding case. Surveillance footage, captured by CCTV cameras, is released to elicit public assistance in identifying the suspect. A surge of astonishment courses through him as the camera lens zooms in on the faces of both the assailant and the victim, for they are identical to the ones he encountered within his dream. Transfixed, his initial shock transmutes into a mingling of fear and bewilderment when a man on the opposite side of the road comes into focus. The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!"

A cascade of questions engulfs his mind. How could he be certain he was dreaming, when reality seems to converge with his nocturnal visions? As a resident of San Francisco, residing six hours away from Los Angeles, how did he become intricately entangled in this unfolding drama? Is the figure captured by the camera genuinely him, or does a doppelganger haunt the streets of LA, granting him a voyeuristic window into their world through his dreams? The answers lie shrouded in mystery, and the man embarks on a journey to unravel the enigma, setting the stage for the captivating tale called DREAM RUNNERS.

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DREAM RUNNERS (mystery/phycological/thriller)

A man finds himself immersed in extraordinarily vivid dreams, as if they stretch on for hours. Amidst the reverie, he becomes an unwitting witness to a botched robbery in the heart of Los Angeles, resulting in a tragic murder. From his vantage point across the road, he flees the scene, but only manages to cover a few blocks before stumbling upon a group of police officers. Eager to share the harrowing incident, he recounts the events in detail, his urgency compelling them to act swiftly. However, rather than questioning him, the authorities promptly initiate their investigation.

After a string of subsequent peculiar occurrences, though lacking violence, the man awakens, bewildered by the length and realism of his dream. Remaining motionless in bed, he contemplates the surreal experience for a few fleeting moments. His confusion intensifies when the first news report of the day reveals an eerily similar robbery and murder, taking place on a street that mirrors the one he traversed within his dream. Perceiving it as an astonishing coincidence, he dismisses the uncanny connection and proceeds with his daily routine.

An uneventful day at the office follows, and upon returning home, the man attends to his evening rituals. As he settles onto the couch, he belatedly realizes he forgot to switch off the television. The news captivates his attention, disclosing additional details about the unfolding case. Surveillance footage, captured by CCTV cameras, is released to elicit public assistance in identifying the suspect. A surge of astonishment courses through him as the camera lens zooms in on the faces of both the assailant and the victim, for they are identical to the ones he encountered within his dream. Transfixed, his initial shock transmutes into a mingling of fear and bewilderment when a man on the opposite side of the road comes into focus. The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!"

A cascade of questions engulfs his mind. How could he be certain he was dreaming, when reality seems to converge with his nocturnal visions? As a resident of San Francisco, residing six hours away from Los Angeles, how did he become intricately entangled in this unfolding drama? Is the figure captured by the camera genuinely him, or does a doppelganger haunt the streets of LA, granting him a voyeuristic window into their world through his dreams? The answers lie shrouded in mystery, and the man embarks on a journey to unravel the enigma, setting the stage for the captivating tale called DREAM RUNNERS.

🐣!!

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Netero
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🤦‍♂️

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DIEM
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I made a plot line for a light novel. Readers come

DREAM RUNNERS (mystery/psychological/thriller)

A man finds himself immersed in extraordinarily vivid dreams, as if they stretch on for hours. Amidst the reverie, he becomes an unwitting witness to a botched robbery in the heart of Los Angeles, resulting in a tragic murder. From his vantage point across the road, he flees the scene, but only manages to cover a few blocks before stumbling upon a group of police officers. Eager to share the harrowing incident, he recounts the events in detail, his urgency compelling them to act swiftly. However, rather than questioning him, the authorities promptly initiate their investigation.

After a string of subsequent peculiar occurrences, though lacking violence, the man awakens, bewildered by the length and realism of his dream. Remaining motionless in bed, he contemplates the surreal experience for a few fleeting moments. His confusion intensifies when the first news report of the day reveals an eerily similar robbery and murder, taking place on a street that mirrors the one he traversed within his dream. Perceiving it as an astonishing coincidence, he dismisses the uncanny connection and proceeds with his daily routine.

An uneventful day at the office follows, and upon returning home, the man attends to his evening rituals. As he settles onto the couch, he belatedly realizes he forgot to switch off the television. The news captivates his attention, disclosing additional details about the unfolding case. Surveillance footage, captured by CCTV cameras, is released to elicit public assistance in identifying the suspect. A surge of astonishment courses through him as the camera lens zooms in on the faces of both the assailant and the victim, for they are identical to the ones he encountered within his dream. Transfixed, his initial shock transmutes into a mingling of fear and bewilderment when a man on the opposite side of the road comes into focus. The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!"

A cascade of questions engulfs his mind. How could he be certain he was dreaming, when reality seems to converge with his nocturnal visions? As a resident of San Francisco, residing six hours away from Los Angeles, how did he become intricately entangled in this unfolding drama? Is the figure captured by the camera genuinely him, or does a doppelganger haunt the streets of LA, granting him a voyeuristic window into their world through his dreams? The answers lie shrouded in mystery, and the man embarks on a journey to unravel the enigma, setting the stage for the captivating tale called DREAM RUNNERS.

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widepeepofrosty
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Bump!

this was a very good read Netero-kun!!!

my favorite line: "The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!""

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acels
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read allat, wheres chapter 2?

#8
Netero
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widepeepofrosty [#6]

Bump!

this was a very good read Netero-kun!!!

my favorite line: "The camera implores the public to identify this mysterious bystander, and the man on the couch utters a mind-bending exclamation, "It's me!""

(✿◠‿◠)

Thank you widepeepofrosty-san 🐧♥️!! stay tuned for chapter 2 next week!

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Netero [#8]

Thank you widepeepofrosty-san 🐧♥️!! stay tuned for chapter 2 next week!

I will be there no matter what. v(=∩_∩=)フ

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Netero
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acels [#7]

read allat, wheres chapter 2?

yeah i think i'm gonna expand the story and post it every week like a new netero song of the week. Now all i need is someone to draw a tall dude with glasses and some waifus.

#11
Dolphin
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https://youtu.be/yUGZwlLoZh0

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DREAM RUNNERS sounds like an intriguing and captivating light novel with elements of mystery, psychology, and thriller. The concept of a man experiencing vivid and lengthy dreams that intersect with real-life events creates a sense of tension and suspense. The protagonist's confusion and the eerie connection between his dreams and the actual crimes add layers of mystery to the story.

The initial encounter with the botched robbery and the subsequent discovery of similar events in reality creates a strong hook for the readers. The revelation that the man captured on the CCTV footage is the protagonist himself introduces an intriguing twist and raises many questions about the nature of his dreams and his involvement in the unfolding drama.

The central themes of identity, reality, and the blurred lines between dreams and waking life provide a strong foundation for exploring psychological and existential elements within the story. The protagonist's journey to unravel the enigma and uncover the truth behind his dreams and their connection to the crimes promises to be an engaging and suspenseful narrative.

To enhance the impact of the story, you may consider delving deeper into the psychological aspects of the protagonist's experiences. Exploring his emotions, fears, and the toll that these intense dreams take on his mental state can add depth to his character and make the readers empathize with him.

Additionally, developing a strong supporting cast of characters, such as the police officers and other individuals the protagonist encounters along his journey, can help provide different perspectives and motivations, adding complexity to the overall narrative.

Overall, DREAM RUNNERS has the potential to be a gripping and thought-provoking light novel, offering readers a thrilling blend of mystery, psychology, and suspense as they follow the protagonist's quest for answers and navigate the blurred boundaries between dreams and reality.

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south_america_best_region
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MMMMMMMMMM
I like it
but
It should have a tone 100% for adults (no stupid jokes, serious tone, etc)
I think it would be ruined if not

#14
Netero
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luckypleb [#12]

DREAM RUNNERS sounds like an intriguing and captivating light novel with elements of mystery, psychology, and thriller. The concept of a man experiencing vivid and lengthy dreams that intersect with real-life events creates a sense of tension and suspense. The protagonist's confusion and the eerie connection between his dreams and the actual crimes add layers of mystery to the story.

The initial encounter with the botched robbery and the subsequent discovery of similar events in reality creates a strong hook for the readers. The revelation that the man captured on the CCTV footage is the protagonist himself introduces an intriguing twist and raises many questions about the nature of his dreams and his involvement in the unfolding drama.

The central themes of identity, reality, and the blurred lines between dreams and waking life provide a strong foundation for exploring psychological and existential elements within the story. The protagonist's journey to unravel the enigma and uncover the truth behind his dreams and their connection to the crimes promises to be an engaging and suspenseful narrative.

To enhance the impact of the story, you may consider delving deeper into the psychological aspects of the protagonist's experiences. Exploring his emotions, fears, and the toll that these intense dreams take on his mental state can add depth to his character and make the readers empathize with him.

Additionally, developing a strong supporting cast of characters, such as the police officers and other individuals the protagonist encounters along his journey, can help provide different perspectives and motivations, adding complexity to the overall narrative.

Overall, DREAM RUNNERS has the potential to be a gripping and thought-provoking light novel, offering readers a thrilling blend of mystery, psychology, and suspense as they follow the protagonist's quest for answers and navigate the blurred boundaries between dreams and reality.

Yeah i asked gpt to help the structure and sentencing appear more novel like but the general plot is something i typed on a note pad after a weird ass dream. Is there other websites or an app that can do it better?

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Netero
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south_america_best_region [#13]

MMMMMMMMMM
I like it
but
It should have a tone 100% for adults (no stupid jokes, serious tone, etc)
I think it would be ruined if not

Okay I'll try 🐸👍

#16
GreyDaze
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The beginning after the end and omniscient reader's viewpoint clear

#17
Netero
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Bump!

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