https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iaBEJ57f58w&t
was looking for criticsm with my editing
i used motion blur which is think looks good but still wanted some input from others
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I think overall it's a cool montage, the clips are good and it was a good watch. The only minor criticism would be the transitions.
Smooth transitions make montages really fun to watch, like flashing into a different clip, or walking smoke into a different clip. I feel like it adds a cool continuity to it.
A few effects could be cool too but not too many.
I feel like too many montage creators add too many effects and half the time I can't even see what's happening.
Overall great job and keep up the good work
Dokka [#5]I think overall it's a cool montage, the clips are good and it was a good watch. The only minor criticism would be the transitions.
Smooth transitions make montages really fun to watch, like flashing into a different clip, or walking smoke into a different clip. I feel like it adds a cool continuity to it.
A few effects could be cool too but not too many.
I feel like too many montage creators add too many effects and half the time I can't even see what's happening.Overall great job and keep up the good work
thanks!
im really proud of the edit at 0:23, but im not very proficient at premiere yet and i hope ill be able to improve the transitions like you said
i wanna use sapphire plugins, but im not paying for that and every crack ive tried hasnt really worked, so hopefully i can use those next time
taehyung [#6]thanks!
im really proud of the edit at 0:23, but im not very proficient at premiere yet and i hope ill be able to improve the transitions like you said
i wanna use sapphire plugins, but im not paying for that and every crack ive tried hasnt really worked, so hopefully i can use those next time
You learn each time you make a video, if you stay consistent then ik you'll improve.
What you've made now is already really great and it'll be cool to see what you make a few months from now
seankuku [#7]I don't know why but I love pat bev and I hope the lakers succeed this season. Everyone doubting them for good reason but just imagine if they go all the way to the semis in playoffs
patrick skilled player but that is not normally, This very very insane....They need to check him pc and game.....Maybe he not cheating but maybe he using the game deficit ...and this cant seem on game screen..He needs to check-up.
Dokka [#8]You learn each time you make a video, if you stay consistent then ik you'll improve.
What you've made now is already really great and it'll be cool to see what you make a few months from now
thanks, appreciate it
what do you think of the thumbnail btw
taehyung [#10]thanks, appreciate it
what do you think of the thumbnail btw
Creative, it’s good to stray away from the default frag movie thumbnails cause half of them look identical
FlyingDoggoWoweeClap6 [#11]W editing but L music
is there a FlyingDoggoWoweeClap7? what happened to FlyingDoggoWoweeClap5??
Dokka [#12]Creative, it’s good to stray away from the default frag movie thumbnails cause half of them look identical
LOL i think its funny but yeah they are all just color corrected ingame screenshots, with guns and knives sometimes outlined
sank3tsu [#4]IMO the edit is already really good + W music taste . Ladiff edit is ugly asf , yours are more natural
idk how ladiff manages to not get cucked by youtube compression though
and while he uploads fairly frequently, he only has like 3-4 plays and imo thats boring af
FlyingDoggoWoweeClap6 [#11]W editing but L music
nah music was a W for me, it was different from what we see in most montages & I liked it!
PurpleHyacinth [#16]I think the transition could be a bit smoother, there's too much rapid cuts that it can be a bit confusing, maybe add a little more effects when you kill someone and sync the kill with the beat of the music would be nice
part of the reason i have so many rapid cuts is because i wanna reduce down time, and keep peoples attention by switching to a different clip as fast as possible. in a lot of other fragmovies imo, it looks awkward a lot of the times when they're just standing there reloading for 2 seconds without anything else happening and then cutting to a clip where they're just walking for 3 seconds until they see an enemy. i think part of that is because they wanna fill in a song as much as possible, and use as few clips they can (ladiff), to upload frequently.
the moment i get a hold of sapphire plugins, i will definitely experiment more with transitions. i personally prefer ALEKSANDAResque fragmovies more than heavily edited ones like from DaMoves and in that regard maybe have my own style0 (i have been doing it this way for a while now) so i dont wanna go overboard. i do feel like that if hit the sweet spot, it could be pretty cool.
and the syncing thing is just unlucky i guess lol i made this video at 4 am? and i was convinced it was kind of synced throughout the song but now that im awake it's kind of inconsistent sometimes, but imo this is very easily flexible.
Ultimateattack [#19]i think its great very clean headshots btw and overall q gd fragmovie
btw js curious are the lyrics not supposed to be synchronised with the frags? idk cos they dont seem to match at some parts? thats the only sort of criticism i have if u can consider it one
overall gd job
oh yeah the syncing to the song is very inconsistent lol i was tired so im just gonna blame it on that
easily fixable though and thanjk you!
LowGun [#21]Music was W , synchronization of the music with the kills could've been better imo.
#20 and #18
crazy what bad sleep can do to a mf
taehyung [#22]#20 and #18
crazy what bad sleep can do to a mf
gotchu! GJ overall! :)
unrelated: do u have a playlist, i really liked your music taste!
LowGun [#23]gotchu! GJ overall! :)
unrelated: do u have a playlist, i really liked your music taste!
i do yeah
its not all like this song, but its mostly hyperpop/similar genre
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/6X3W1hwQyRea4PsxDYXMai?si=c2e8667615ab48e6
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